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            2017年12月英語四級作文范文及解析(親子關系,滬江)

            低級拿分版
            Nowadays, there has been a heated discussion as to the relationship between parents and children. Views on the topic vary greatly among people from different walks of life. Some believe that parents should spend more time with their children, but others consider it better to ask children to show more understanding towards their parents.

            On one hand, I agree with the idea that as children, we should show more understanding and appreciate the love and life our parents have provided us with. Therefore, we could help our parents at home, say, share some of the housework. Furthermore, we could also tell them “I love you” every day to thank them. On the other hand, working parents are busy and have great pressure, so it is likely that they neglect their kids. Hence, to improve their relationship, parents could sit down and talk with their children, listen to their problems, help them and respect them.

            However, from my perspective, this is not one man’s job. Both parents and children should work to understand each other. Thus, it is crucial to have effective communication. Only in this way can the relationship between parents and children be improved!

            解析
            文體:本次的作文是大家所熟悉的“議論文”,所以在文體上應該給了大家一顆定心丸,比今年6月份的應用文——廣告——要容易寫很多;

            審題:其實題目中,最重要的一句話是:how to best handle the relationship between parents and children, 所以大家要好好思考一下這一句話就好了;這句話體現出的主題是“親子關系”,體現的要求是需要一個“解決方法”,因為措辭用的是“how”,所以大家在寫的時候,圍繞“親子關系”,給出“解決方法”就不會偏題了;


            結構:議論文用三段論是最簡單也最有效的。正如滬江網校的四六級課程里,一直給大家灌輸的理念就是要“龍頭鳳尾,中間結構清晰”。也就是說,開頭和結尾至少要用詞準確,有吸引力,尤其是開頭部分。因為開頭是給改卷老師形成第一印象的重要位置,所以大家要保證開頭的質量;結尾一段也是如此;而中間部分,有連接詞展現段落的結構清晰,這篇文章在結構上就很清晰明了了。所以本文第一段,引入親子關系的主題,第二段給出自己的解決方法,并說明原因,第三段進一步給出對于集體和對于個人的不同建議,思路就很清楚了

            高端版

            The growing conflict in education, especially the conflict between teachers and students, has aroused a heated discussion as to the solutions to this phenomenon. Views on the topic vary greatly among people from different walks of life.

            There are several things we can do based on the causes for such conflict. First, students usually don’t have a thorough understanding of how challenging and tiresome a teachers’ job could be; therefore, the school authorities could create more chances for students to experience it, say, let students be one-day teachers. Also, it is suggested that regular experience-sharing from experienced teachers and constant communication with students, particularly with those troubled ones, should be required of young novice teachers so that they can put themselves in the students’ shoes. Finally, balancing educational resources will greatly relieve the pressure on teachers and schools because they don’t need to deal with so many students at a time.

            From my perspective, it is crucial that the relationship between teachers and students be improved remarkably and immediately. Only in this way can we build a harmonious society.

            解析
            文體:本次的作文是大家所熟悉的“議論文”,所以在文體上應該給了大家一顆定心丸,比今年6月份的應用文——廣告——要容易寫很多;

            審題:其實題目中,最重要的一句話是:how to best handle the relationship between teachers and students, 所以大家要好好思考一下這一句話就好了;這句話體現出的主題是“師生關系”,體現的要求是需要一個“解決方法”,因為措辭用的是“how”,所以大家在寫的時候,圍繞“師生關系”,給出“解決方法”就不會偏題了;

            結構:議論文用三段論是最簡單也最有效的。正如滬江網校的四六級課程里,一直給大家灌輸的理念就是要“龍頭鳳尾,中間結構清晰”。也就是說,開頭和結尾至少要用詞準確,有吸引力,尤其是開頭部分。因為開頭是給改卷老師形成第一印象的重要位置,所以大家要保證開頭的質量;結尾一段也是如此;而中間部分,有連接詞展現段落的結構清晰,這篇文章在結構上就很清晰明了了。所以本文第一段,引入師生關系的主題,第二段給出自己的解決方法,并說明原因,第三段進一步給出建議或者以總結的方式升華主題,思路就很清楚了。

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